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Comma-Friend or Foe?

7:55 pm · category: Random Rambling, Writing

I would like to think the comma is my friend. However, when I read through my critiques I find that I either am not using them enough or incorrectly. The question really becomes this- which is right? In all honesty I believe it is a fair mix. I always love finding new resources as a writer and if you have never perused the Online English Degree Resources I say stick a pin in it. There is a wealth of information there. Some merely reminders of what you were taught in school. Here is what they had to say about the comma:

The comma is perpetually misused.  Although it’s one of the most important punctuation marks, its seeming insignificance on the page makes it a regularly subject to neglect and abuse.

The most common use of the comma is in coordination with a conjunction to connect two independent clauses (I went to the beach, but David stayed at home).  With short sentences like that, the comma isn’t always necessary.  Sometimes the conjunction alone will do just fine.  But in academic prose, the comma is still advisable.

The comma is also used to separate three or more elements in a series (She went skiing with Noam, Henry, Nathan, and Catherine).  That last comma between the second-to-last element and the “and” is something of a point of contention.  It’s called an Oxford comma, and it’s often left out of periodical publications.  Frankly, it’s up to you whether or not to use it.  We just think it looks classy.

A comma can also be used to separate an introductory element from the rest of a sentence (Writing my book, I discovered how little I missed my old job).  Again, it might be acceptable under some circumstances to eliminate the comma if the sentence seems to flow better without it.  But if in doubt, keep the comma.

Parenthetical elements can be set off by a pair of commas.  These can be appositives (Chances were slim that Bashar al-Assad, President of Syria, would face serious challenges) or they can contain linking words to the rest of the sentence (Songkhlanakarin University, which is also known as Prince of Songkhla University or Mor Or, is the largest university in Southern Thailand).  Absolute phrases are also treated as parenthetical (My old life behind me, I tried to assimilate in New York as quickly as possible) as are interjections (Keep in mind, of course, that casino gambling is designed for the house to come out on top).  On a related note, commas can express contrast (Contrary to popular belief, the North Korean juche state is best thought of as a unique construct, not Stalinist, not Confucian).

When one is using multiple coordinate adjectives, commas can be used to separate them (He’s an ugly, mean-spirited kind of guy).  However, they aren’t always used (I have an old French bicycle).

A comma is also a great way to introduce quotes.  One comma is needed to introduce a quote (As Polonius said, “Neither a borrower nor a lender be”).  If the quote is being split in two, then two commas are necessary (“I don’t know,” said Lauren, “if the problem is you or me).  For longer quotes, however, it’s better to use a colon.

Perhaps the most common comma error is the comma splice.  This occurs when a comma is used in lieu of a semicolon, period, or conjunction to separate two independent clauses as in “I went to the beach yesterday, it was OK.”  While this is often cited as a common punctuation error, it’s better thought of as indicative of a larger error.  Commas in general are overused, and one is better-advised to be sparing with them.

 

Like I said, a wealth of information. Now you can go on to be a master of comma usage! Have a great day peeps!

Some Men Are Like Fine Wine

9:47 am · category: Inspire, Men, Midweek Hottie, Writing

And Jon Bon Jovi  fits that for me. He’s one of those… gets better with age kind of guys. Sure back in the big hair band days of the eighties he was still nice to look at, but come on! Just look at this and tell me you aren’t drooling.

Yeah. Nice eye candy after all these years. Oh and yet another hottie post for my darling T! Why? Because we are revving up for JBJ making his Vegas appearance in a couple of weeks. That is going to be a great night! Now, off to have coffee and start my day. Then home to get busy on increasing that word count. I hear you back there. You in the back. Which story? Which story? Taunting me with the unspoken challenge in your words all while I am mid drool here. Truth be told I have a few ideas that are marinating right now.  Zombie slayer story? Perhaps. Second book in my Moonlight trilogy? Could be. Vampire story? Don’t know. Justin’s story to follow up Buckling Down? Possibly, though I will tell you that Justin is being quite stubborn at the moment and has been tied up in the corner until he can play nice. I guess if you really want to know, you’ll have to hunt me down. Have a great Wednesday!

A Quickie!

Did I get your attention? Oh I sure hope so! Today’s post is short and sweet. Mostly because I am blogging over at The Sweet, the Bad, ‘n the Wicked today and am hoping you will pop over there for my rambling words. But I can’t not tempt you just a wee bit before you go.I give you Ryan Kwanten who portrays Jason Stackhouse on HBO’s True Blood. Drool if you must ladies, but he’s not one I’m sharing. Now go over to SBnW and see what I’m blogging about over there.

P.S. I promise to get back to my regular blogging routine soon. Wednesdays are always crazy hectic though because it is a double post day for yours truly. Well that and I’ve got a little somethin’ somethin’ in the works. Later and happy Wednesday!

Goodbye 2010!

11:32 am · category: Inspire, Just for Fun, Writing

Yes, it is that time of year when everyone says their goodbyes to the year and welcomes in a new year with resolutions. I for one, will not be making resolutions. Why? They don’t keep. Not in my world. Besides, how motivational is it to start every year with the same resolutions? I for one, am tired of looking back at the year and focusing on the things I didn’t accomplish. As I  visit my friends around the blogging universe, I see that I am not the only one. Do I want to be thinner? Of course. Do I believe the resolution will get me there? Not on your life. After so many years of un-kept resolutions, I think it is high time this girl tosses her resolution habit. How does that New Year’s saying go? Oh yes, out with the old and in with the new.

So to usher in 2011, I am here by making a vow to look at this year with a new fervor. This year will yield great things. I can feel it. Whether those things will happen to me or those close to me, who’s to say. All I know is that they will happen. This is the year of positive thinking people. Careful because I think it’s contagious. Don’t worry. It’s not something that will send you into hiding. You want to catch this bug. I promise it will do us all a bit of good.

To my family, friends, acquaintances, fellow writers, and anyone else who happens to peruse this post, I wish you nothing but the best this year. May your dreams come to fruition, the evil green stuff multiply in your banks, and may you find whatever it is that your heart seeks. For now, I am going to seek the coffee pot. Then I am going to start cleaning up my writing space and sit down to make some real progress. Maybe put away the Christmas tree too while I’m at it. Let’s round this post out with a little music shall we? This is currently a favorite of mine. You have to love a sassy southern girl. Happy New Year!

Holiday Freebie?

I am very excited and can’t wait to share this free read with you all! Believe it should be up aeound noon PST. Just click on the image below to head over to The Samhellion where you can read a copy of Winter Kissed, my holiday free-read. Thanks again to Silke Juppenlatz for the fabulous cover art and to Nina Croft for her editing skills. I hope you all enjoy!

Plays Well With Others~

9:03 pm · category: Shameless Blog Plug, Writing

Or at least I like to think I do. I am embarking on yet another new adventure. A group blog with some fellow authors, both published and aspiring. Should be fun. I suggest you make it a point to stop by and visit over at The Sweet, the Bad, ‘n the Wicked. Trust me, I think you will enjoy sharing and conversing with authors of the varied sub-genres within the realm of romance.

Meanwhile, a little update on yours truly. I am working on a holiday free read. It has been an exciting journey. One that has also turned into a learning experience. This is true of most things I have attempted in my writing career. When the story is ready, trust me you will be the first to know. Time for me to get back to work. I have a full manuscript to tighten up and draft my query letters for, a free read to send off, and new stories to pen. I will touch base with you all again soon.

Dancing in the Dark~

1:20 am · category: Ponderings, Writing

Dear Muse,

We do this often you and I. You tempt me with your story ideas–a melody I cannot resist. The keyboard is ready for us to indulge in the movements we are so familiar with.  My fingers are hovering over the keys…waiting. A whispered word. Vampire. I think–overdone. Something new. Again you whisper the same word. I give in.

The words begin to form a scene that is all mine. The excitement builds. Passion for the art I so dearly love is reignited. Then you step away and take those little temptations that spark life into my work with you. I search for you and discover that my partner has left me alone to dance in the dark.

You may think this will stop me. That I will leave the dance floor. Spirit broken. But you lured me out and the song is not finished. I will continue dancing. Alone if I must. For I have not yet mastered this dance. Little do you know that my determination runs deep. So to you my dear muse, I have only this to say-

Would you like to join me? With or without you, I will continue this dance. Even in the dark if I must. Though, I do prefer to have a little company from my partner in crime. Take time and think about it. I will be here, fingers dancing on the keys.

Yours Truly,

Moira

Rain Makes Me Happy~

9:54 am · category: Writing

Oh there is nothing like a rainy day to fill me with the desire to write. To sit down with my laptop, open the patio door, and let the sounds provide the background music as my fingers fly over the keys.

Something about the rain that wakes my inner muse. Today is such a day. Let’s see what my muse does!

Query Me This~

4:00 am · category: Writing

I have talked to several of my fellow authors and the consensus seems to be the same. We all loathe writing the much needed query letter. Have you ever tried to sum up a 90k story into say…. one to two pages? So not an easy task.

They are a necessary evil and I can appreciate the value in a well written query. It is very much like pitching your awe inspiring epic urban fantasy novel to an agent you met in an elevator and have 30 seconds to capture the awesomeness that is your book and sell it. Those authors out there who can do just that without struggling or sounding like an arse… I admire you.

I will master the query letter. I am determined to make it bend to my will. Ok, possibly not, but with each letter I write it has to get easier right? No doubt it is a learning process much like every other aspect of writing. So regardless of how difficult and daunting the task seems… I will keep on keepin’ on as my dear friend Molly McClain said (though on a totally non query letter topic. ;) )

To Be Continued~

4:00 am · category: Just for Fun, Writing

Those very lovely words were recently typed as I reached the end of book one in my wolf/fae trilogy (or as some people like to call it… the No Furry Faeries Trilogy).  This book has been two years in the making and even though I am now working with my internal editor and preparing myself for some feedback from various sources, I am feeling very pleased with myself.

I think each book is an accomplishment, but I’ll let you in on a little secret. I am very hard on myself when it comes to most things. Paranormal stuff… forget it, I am like a damn lunatic. I have very high standards for myself when I write in this genre because I read it myself in my limited spare time. Since it is my favorite to read, I am obsessively critical of my paranormal stuff.

This is probably true of all of us. Surely we each have little areas where we are more critical of our work or performance in than others. Care to share so I can stop looking over my shoulder for the men in white lab coats?

While I anxiously await your answers, here is a sampling from the unedited version of my book, whose title is remaining under tight wraps for now. It is one among many moments I have a fondness for. This moment takes place after my heroine, Kiara, has a wee bit of a rough day. ~

A drink and the normalcy of humans should have been enough to calm my nerves, or so I tried to convince myself when I pulled the H3 into the parking spot and entered the dimly lit Irish pub.  I should have stayed home, but instead I perched myself on a stool at the bar. So much for my date with Ben and Jerry.

Sláinte!